So, I applied to become a teacher on a new Minecraft server, and here was what they said. I'm not upset over what they were trying to get across, just the rudeness of the statement:
Oh my god. Where do I begin… Welp, this is going to take until Christmas. 2073.
Before I say anything, I do not mean to sound hostile. I am simply saying these things out of what it is.
Welp, here is my review…
This is extremely untidy. If you were to look at the accepted applications, you would see why this is beyond untidy…
"If this application is denied, I would still like to be a regular player of this server." Do I even need to judge this sentence?
"because, although,"… Grammar issues right there…
An Anarchy server… Are you serious? Its not my place to judge what type of server you want to own, but seriously? You own a server already and yet want to become a f***ing teacher on another server. Need I say more?
From what I'm seeing, you're not exactly online very much…
"Random fact about me"… Seriously? We don't need "random facts" about you. This is your character you're talking about. Not you.
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You are probably wondering why it says 'Trialed' and not denied, even though I gave my reasons to deny it.
Malaki brought it to my attention that yes, you have been nice and supportive. So you will be trialed. You will remain a Student, but you will be tested to see if you are fit for the job.
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